I fully don't expect you to message me, I guess if I was getting 20 or 30 messages a day from people I wouldn't have to.
)." In this revised statement, I have turned a cliché into a statement that has personality, flirts with the reader, provides bait and discusses the type of movies that I am specifically into. For example, writing that "I really to meet a man who is smart, fun and handsome," doesn't sound terrible, but the word "hope" implies that you are the one chasing and "hoping" things will turn out OK.
It sure would make writing this more entertaining, and reading it would be much more fun too. Maybe the rock-star lifestyle would be fun, but I don't want to live that life and a girl that's looking for that is not for me.
I could tell you about all the exotic cities and expensive hotels I've stayed at while being on tour. While my story might be Rolling Stone worthy, I do work hard, pay my bills, enjoy the company of my friends & family ...
Good Generic Example #1 Let's face it, I don't live the life of a rock-star or famous athlete ...
but those guys are always getting caught cheating on their wives, so why would I want to live that life?
Write the wrong thing, and you’re doomed to fail, with your empty inbox serving as a constant reminder that your profile’s problematic.